Comment on Aphasia by DreamAmongStars

SovereignSin's avatar
"Pink softness" in place of mouth and lips was absolutely brilliant. Not sure why that struck me as profoundly as it did, but it needed to be said. Excellent poem. :D
DreamAmongStars's avatar
Thanks! I used it mainly because I felt that if I had said mouth or lips it would seem repetitive :/ I'm glad you like it!