IMHO this is the best depiction of Hired yet. No one else managed to convey the sheer size and "subtlety" of Silver Storm as much you did.
As much as I love the drawing itself though, it would have benefited immensely from a little touching up after the scan. It's very pale and blurred. Just look how a little application of the Auto-Levels tool and a sharpness filter can make the drawing shine:
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