Comment on Why'd you bring me him? by Bread-Crumbz
Things are coming to head! *excited squee*
One thing though, not sure if someone has pointed this out already but you seemed to switch tenses a lot in this chapter, jumping between "is" and "was" several times in the same sentence. It got a little confusing, at least for my silly little brain.
One thing though, not sure if someone has pointed this out already but you seemed to switch tenses a lot in this chapter, jumping between "is" and "was" several times in the same sentence. It got a little confusing, at least for my silly little brain.