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Comment on Time Creeps By by *XullraeZauviir

~joukal:iconjoukal: Jul 1, 2006, 4:58:20 AM
This is very good! ;)
Great job, Lisa!

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*DSNG:iconDSNG: Jun 30, 2006, 9:13:50 PM
Very detailed... I like the way you described what Horock saw, as he gazed at the hot chick :D
Well done XZ!

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*XullraeZauviir:iconXullraeZauviir: Jul 1, 2006, 4:51:18 AM
:wow: that's the most difficult part of the piece. I was stuck on it for 2 full days. Horock's player had only said she was beautiful and left it there and I at the time of the log only mentioned her eyes. So as I was editing, I felt it appropriate to describe her entire face. It wasn't easy, I rewrote so many times that I was too tired to care about the rest of the story.

But if you easily spotted that and it's your favorite part then my work paid off and this piece was not a total waste of time.

Thanks! :hug: Phew! :dance:

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~joukal:iconjoukal: Jul 1, 2006, 4:58:20 AM
This is very good! ;)
Great job, Lisa!
*XullraeZauviir:iconXullraeZauviir: Jul 1, 2006, 5:03:14 AM
Are you sure? I think it sucks mostly. ;) :giggle:

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~joukal:iconjoukal: Jul 1, 2006, 5:14:28 AM
It's good! Love the description part of Xullrae, that what Horock saw :)
And I like that conversation between Xull and Cogliostro :D
*XullraeZauviir:iconXullraeZauviir: Jul 1, 2006, 5:20:55 AM
You're the second to say so! :glomp: I just hope folks are sayong that for real, and not just saying what I want to hear. :giggle:

Xull and Cog are quite the bantering pair. :laughing: They were funny as they were, so I changed nothing in their dialog from the original. ;) They made me laugh. I forgot how goofy we were 5 years ago. ^^;

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*DSNG:iconDSNG: Jul 1, 2006, 9:17:00 AM
2 days? wow... well, trust me, it payed off :D
Again, well done!! :peace: :D :peace:

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*XullraeZauviir:iconXullraeZauviir: Jul 1, 2006, 10:06:57 AM
Thank you, that means a lot. :hug:

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~DeathRetsu:iconDeathRetsu: Jul 1, 2006, 6:59:49 PM
Wow, I'm going to have to keep that detailed description of Xull’rae in mind when I draw her for the contest. I thought it was a good read. :D <3

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*XullraeZauviir:iconXullraeZauviir: Jul 1, 2006, 7:28:16 PM
Yeah my logs I submit will be good for description and ideas on what Xull'rae is like and what she wears. ;) I'm glad you like the description, it drove me bonkers though trying to word it right. :giggle:

I'm glad over all that it sparked your interest. :dance:

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