in my opinion the only critique needed here is...well....oh yea you are supposed to make your own costume any idiot can go on the internet and buy one..
Actually, I don't 'have' to make my own cosplay. You can buy it if you don't have any sewing skills. Cosplay isn't about making it yourself, it's about having fun as who you're dressed up as. But that's my own opinion Thanks for your input!