Really good chapter. You did a really good job with it. The dialogue was very well written, especially in Discord's case. You got him spot on. Also, Celestia's final words of the chapter are killing me inside. "Again" is a horrible word when it comes to dangerous situations.
Thanks. Her final words are a hint of something I have in mind for her character in a later chapter. I only hope it pays off when I eventually reveal it.
Well, you've got me on the edge of my metaphorical seat. Definitely looking forward to it!