xMJJMoonwalker's avatar
This is pretty cool. Very well-written. I think a much deeper story could be built around this. And I don't know if it's just me, but I think the way this character talks, they sound more on the female side. At least, that's the voice I heard in my head. Anyways, congratulations on the DD. I hope a unicorn doesn't come along with tea and biscuits to ruin the moment XD
Little-Red-Hat's avatar
Your point about the voice is a fair one. After all, this is based on some improv I did after having a random idea, and I'm female, so the piece might have a more female voice as a result.

Thanks for the feedback!
xMJJMoonwalker's avatar
Ah that makes sense.

You're welcome! Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece ^w^