Comment on Are You? by MikkiMarie

Am I? If that is all that it takes to be 'perfect', then goddamn right I am. My turn to ask a question: why the actual fuck are you 'apologizing'? Instead of creating your own brand of perfect, you're lying down so you would be easier to catch and curb stomp.

If this comes from the heart and is meant to provoke feelings in the reader, it sure provoked some, though I'm not sure these were the right ones. Also, even free verse has to have a semblance of structure. The only structural element I see here is repetition of which there is too much.