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Please do not adjust your Dyslexic, the person who typed this is a computer. _ 'Rational arguments don't usually work on religious people, if they did, there wouldn't be any.' House
I think you nailed th essence of Jack in the first panel. Then he seems to slowly transform into Jonathon Davis of KoRn. If you can find a way to convey irritation without resorting to the "angry-scowly-Iamthegoddamnbatman" eyes, you could hit a homerun.
Also, try experimenting with getting the thick black raccoon-eyeliner going, because that is part of the signature "look".
And of course... always a treat seeing new stuff from you.
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Peace is a lie, there is only passion.
Through passion, I gain strength.
Through strength, I gain power.
Through power, I gain victory.
Through victory, my chains are broken.
The Force shall free me
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You wouldn't know a good thing if it came up and slit your throat.