Comment on Ofiara Prologue by ODSTshane

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DodgeStreaker
So much AWESOMENES! Got to paragraph and I was all like; "ALRIGHT KIM TIME TO FAVE THIS AND CONTINUE READING AFTER LEAVING THIS COMMENT!" *pushes fave button* "SUCCESS!"
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ODSTshane
eh thanks i guess for commenting on this abomonation of a story...have any particular parts you liked or are you still reading?
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DodgeStreaker
I like how you described the capitols and such and also how Astor said; "If the humans are peasants,then we are rats." c: I like that he thinks we're not peasants
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ODSTshane
yeah...astor is aweosme...XD


ugh dunno if i want to continue it however...

eh want the next chapter?
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DodgeStreaker
He is awesome XDD

YOU SHOULD CONTINUE! I VOTE 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 TIMES FOR YES :D

Yes please c:
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ODSTshane
alright here ya go.

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stil dnt know why ya like this -w-
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DodgeStreaker
yay c:

I like it because I like fantasy stuff, its always the best thing ever c: SI-FI!
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ODSTshane
its hard as hell to write...the story is very complex i gotta give it that -.- but still its terrible in my eyes i dunno probably cause im borderline wasted atm XD
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