Comment on burning bodies by learningtobefree
This is really stunning. 
I really love how each thought has somewhere to go, so each line is more than just a snapshot, but a suggestion of more to come, if that makes sense. Also, really powerful verbs! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem of yours!
I really love how each thought has somewhere to go, so each line is more than just a snapshot, but a suggestion of more to come, if that makes sense. Also, really powerful verbs! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem of yours! 
haha well that's definitely what i tried to do, so i'm glad it worked for you! thanks for all the love c:
You're very welcome!