I didn't like it. Here's why.

Voice acting. Those aren't the final voices, are they? Because if any executive heard those grating voices, you might be rejected ASAP.

The random "humor". You can portray a character with a lot of personality in a short time. Here, we know that she's a crazy raccoon, but I'm not getting anything deeper than that. The action is so slow (I understand it's an animatic) and even then you can't find anything out except that she's crazy.

Finally, it's as if no one is truly interacting with each other. Strawberry looks at the baby, and since the baby's levitating she could've been drawn at least thirty different ways to show she was upset and pushy to see what his "plan" was.

That's my two cents.