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I'm a member of =DeviantDolls and *VisualLit, are you?
The Scraps...where poems go to be improved with advanced critique.
The above line has me confused. The preposition "on" is modifying the verb "fare", if you get rid of "on" I think it will flow more readily. Repalce it with a comma and call it a day.
The last stanza is metaphorically superb, even if the thing it is ruminating upon is not. Regardless, the writing itself is solid and the diction is excellent.
Keep up the most excellent work!
- Keegan
Anyways, I don't do this kind of poem often, so thanks much
The last stanza's been the one I've questioned the most...I like the metaphor, but does the switch from food to geography fit?
Thanks much for the help. I'll be giving that comma some thought, once I get my noggin around the idea a bit more.
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Yeah, in kyrgyzstan.
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