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I actually really like the weird effect with the jagged and solid, but I'm often that way with new things I haven't seen before.... it's like, ooohhh cherries on that shirt, and then everyone has them and you start noticing most of the cherries are sloppily done.... or maybe that's an awful relation.... T3T but I really REALLY appreciate your critique - I don't get enough of it and every artist needs it!
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