Thank you. I'm glad you like it

I thought of having the dragons show up earlier, not necessarily more description of them but rather the fear of dragons and the way they influence people's lives. I've also been thinking of making this idea, of the father-son relationship, more of a side-plot in the next version of the story, and making the story significantly longer, following the hero's development as he grows older and as he changes from a dreamer without a plan to a down-to-earth young man who can make his dream come true while taking into account the practical aspects of it as well. This way I can comfortably fit in more worldbuilding since there'd also be a longer plot.