Deznok's avatar
Well i mean if you're focusing more on the dynamics of everything around him i think you should make the background and the aura of the staff pop out. Your middleground is not bad at all. If your pose is stationary than your pose is not really giving out the signal that everything around him is in motion. Every posecritic says something even ifyour it's notthe dynamic. Make the things around him capture his eyes his arms and his body a bit. Maybe add a bit of the luminous glare into his eye body and his face show that the aura bounces off as a songal of motion. Add more bit to the background to give more of a feel of the things around him.


Sorry if im being a party pooper, but like i said the drawing is really good so far.
Alyx-XCV's avatar
Towards the end i was planning on adding more effects such as wind and etc to try and show the movement of everything else, if that's somewhat what you're referring to? Once I get the finished piece done I'd like you to determine whether or not I got that look achieved. I'll definitely try to include all these factors you brought up, so thanks again! 
Deznok's avatar
Thank you! I can't wait to see how this will turn out. Iv have always enjoyed your work so i bet there will no disappointments with ends results.
Alyx-XCV's avatar
well thank you i appreciate the kind words! c:
Deznok's avatar
*Every pose says something even if it's not dynamic

*Signal of motion

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