Give me a moment, it's only been 16 hours It's a good story! Or at least the basics of it. It's a nice use of good intentions gone evil. Even the father's dead (an unfortunate cliché in RPG characters) is justified. I could suggest the mother still being alive though. There's no need for her to be written out of the story in any way, and it would even form great character development over the course of the RPG. If she was a devout believer of the divine order you mentioned, it's even assumable she accepted her son being chased out of town, and possible be torn up about it. It could make for a whole story by itself Just a thought. That'll be one penny please.
I actually was meaning for his mother to appear sooner or later in some point of the game. but that's a good idea. A servant of the Divine order, sworn to vanquish evil, including necromancers. And yet, she has a son that uses Necromancy. Not to kill others. Just in the attempt to bring his father back.
Interesting. He told my character a good bit of this, of course, and you told me some too, but it's nice to be able to read it in story form. Great job, it's a really interesting story.
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