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~JediZero:iconJediZero: Aug 20, 2006, 8:22:39 PM
<_<; Apperantly nobody cares.
~Saurus:iconSaurus: Aug 21, 2006, 9:20:44 AM
Give me a moment, it's only been 16 hours :D It's a good story! Or at least the basics of it. It's a nice use of good intentions gone evil. Even the father's dead (an unfortunate cliché in RPG characters) is justified. I could suggest the mother still being alive though. There's no need for her to be written out of the story in any way, and it would even form great character development over the course of the RPG. If she was a devout believer of the divine order you mentioned, it's even assumable she accepted her son being chased out of town, and possible be torn up about it. It could make for a whole story by itself :D Just a thought. That'll be one penny please.
~JediZero:iconJediZero: Aug 21, 2006, 8:55:30 PM
I actually was meaning for his mother to appear sooner or later in some point of the game. but that's a good idea. A servant of the Divine order, sworn to vanquish evil, including necromancers. And yet, she has a son that uses Necromancy. Not to kill others. Just in the attempt to bring his father back.
~Saurus:iconSaurus: Aug 22, 2006, 9:57:35 AM
That'll be an interesting reunion. If you need more ideas, you know where to find me :)
~Dunnas:iconDunnas: Aug 22, 2006, 5:15:41 PM
Interesting. He told my character a good bit of this, of course, and you told me some too, but it's nice to be able to read it in story form. Great job, it's a really interesting story.

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~JediZero:iconJediZero: Aug 22, 2006, 5:29:23 PM
Right. ^_^ Hey, got Neverwinter nights? you could join in the fun.
~Saurus:iconSaurus: Aug 22, 2006, 11:43:38 PM
Nope, I do not posses Neverwinter nights. I heard great things about it, but I never got around to playing it.
~YamiSuperKirby:iconYamiSuperKirby: Aug 26, 2006, 2:08:35 PM
(b-'.'-)b Cool, JZ. Yeah...that's all.

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