J-CFauvelle's avatar
This looks very interesting, I like the open mechanism and the general shape. BUT, if you are open to constructive criticism keep on reading. ----> this is my opinion : The mech itself looks cool 2 parts bother me. When you look at the inside of the soulders or behind the pilot it looks very functional, believable. But when you look at the canon it looks like 3 tubes placed in a barel, not something that can move around or shoot something, the mechanism seems too simple. the second part about the mech is the feet. the legs themselve look good but the feet seem to be unbalanced. When legs are designed with the second knee they usually have a foot that is very vertical such as a hoof, the other option is a toe (or claw or whatever) behind the foot for balance. I admit this point is kind of picky. Then the second part that bothers me is the pilot. The color and design of her clothes give it a sci-fy vibe, especially the teal on the screen or buttons, also she is inside a steampunk mech, working around these things is probably very messy, maybe add soot or oil spot. These are the things that in my opinion can be improved. Hope this helps. 
clayscence's avatar
thank you for your comment, I really appreciate it. I will try to apply those thing in my next mecha for sure, thanks again :)