Comment on Zenith: Chapter 5 by TheDescendantofKehAn
Awwwww, Spike!
You have a beautiful, beautiful touch with emotion. That raw terror of Spike, and the way he's facing that fear, willing to do anything for Twilight is incredible. Really beautifully done. And then you manage to go from fear to sorrow and shame, and it's done so smoothly you just can't help but feel for the little guy...
You have a beautiful, beautiful touch with emotion. That raw terror of Spike, and the way he's facing that fear, willing to do anything for Twilight is incredible. Really beautifully done. And then you manage to go from fear to sorrow and shame, and it's done so smoothly you just can't help but feel for the little guy...
Thank you! I'm glad that I was able to bring those emotions around so well for you!