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AAAAAAAAAAAH! SUSPENSE! I'M MELTING!!!!!!!

 

(Seriously though, good chapter.)

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Thanks :D

What do you like in this chapter?
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Seeing Scarlet Spider's aggressive attitude is humorous, I don't know what it is but he just cracks me up, probably cause I never expect Peter (or a clone Peter at least) swear and act rude.

 

I was also a bit scared when Otto spoke with 'a mad hybrid of anger and delight'. I was like "What the hell is wrong with you?" XD

 

I know I'm weird for finding the behaviour of these to funny but I still like the tense atmosphere.

blacksuitchris's avatar
Hey it's cool but with Otto's madness, one of the main themes in this fanfic is that arrogance always leads to downfall
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Well, it is your story so you know what's best! I look forward to see if MJ survives or not. MWHAHAHAHAHA!
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Hey don't give up on MJ just yet, there's two other Spiders going up against Otto ;)