This was fantastic. The power behind the words really shone, and it did intimidate me a little so that I sat in fear, hoping that I had never broken a writer's heart. All of the different ways of using the heart worked really well: the idea of them hiding between the stanzas hammering out the beat, the idea of heart monitors being okay but the writing being a flatline resounding in your ears, and the thought that broken hearts are sharp enough to cut yourself on are all wonderful additions tot he piece. Overall, it was gorgeously done.