GeorgeVanyan's avatar
you're doing it really good, but there are some parts that (on my opinion) are a bit bad. i mean the sky...
i looked through your works and it seems like you use too much water. find the balance between too wet brush and dry one and let the paper dry well before putting another layer. that will cause less "mess"
hope it helps, and hope i haven't offended you..just trying to help
GeorgeVanyan's avatar
and sorry for my bad english