I'm sure you're going to get this a lot, so I'll be the first to poke at the Elephant: Quotations around the text where someone is speaking would be very nice.
yeah i know ,as i said a professional writer ron marz will do the final polish for print 
as i butcher grammar like a boss! XD
as i butcher grammar like a boss! XDYou butchering monster! D:
Oh god, I read polish as in the language spoken in Poland. My mind went kaboomboom
lol!