Well, not for pure criticism, but the remiges feathers don't arrange as you have represented.
The primaries are connected to the second finger of the "hand", while the secondaries depart from the wrist to the elbow and they're connected to the ulna.
There are no flight feathers on the humerus but there're tertiaries and/or coverts and they are very different in shape and structure of a classic remex.
Here you can see what I said
www.newscientist.com/data/gall…www.welcomewildlife.com/site/c…