Hey, nice poem! Very nice images and all that. i like it, but i think you could maybe work on the flow a little bit, it's patchy at best in many places.
Good luck!
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I once had a blog site where I posted relationship trouble "things"... It was named "iwishiwasthere.xxx.xxx" the name came from exactly the same feelings as expressed here. Well done!
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The soul would have no rainbow had the eyes no tears.
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Or realise i'm not there,
i like that alot
mann the emotion hit me
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baby, seasons change, people dont