PikachuLover2012's avatar
True. Snivy and Servine's limbs do change into stubby leaves in the end. I forgot that Marshtomp is a biped. ^^;

Sorry about that. Its just every time I see fan-art of fakemon evolutions, they often look too similar to their pre-evolutions, having no drastic change in the final evo. I didn't mean to offend you. ^^;

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Oh, speaking of Fakemon, maybe you could take a look at some of mine. I've been trying to help out :iconpengie9290: with Pokemon ideas for his fic, but I need a little critiquing.
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fluffythehedgehog12.deviantart… <---Random OC adopting folder if you wanted to check that out too. XD
PikachuLover2012's avatar
I'm not very good with critiques, but here goes. Seems like most of the Fakemon designs are pretty decent, but there are a few evolutions that seem pretty "generic" to me. I think they'll fit pretty well with the fanfic. :nod:

The fire-snake one's(sorry, forgot the name) evolution is an example of its design looking a bit "generic" to its pre-evolution. Maybe having it, and other Fakemon based on mythology(like Altaria is based on Peng, a Japanese dragon bird) or a reference to culture(like Emboar is based on Chinese culture or the Chinese boar). You can always look up images and/or old myths to give you an idea. :)

I hope this helped in anyway. I did the best I could. ^^;
fluffythehedgehog12's avatar
Thanks! I'm actually kind of a critique hound, so I like getting all this stuff. XD And a Grammar Nazi, but we don't need to go deep into that. :P

Can you actually send that OC adopting link around because I need- I mean... Want some points. XD
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...And because of this comment, I now know that I get a message whenever someone uses my avatar in a message.
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Oh, mentions? When someone mentions you in a comment? Yeah, I get that too. XD