dear-sweet-molestia's avatar

Gosh this DA post has been teasing me for the whole week, I had internet issues and couldn't watch the goddamn video.

 

First bran new video with your bran new style, and it is amazing. The character are well depicted, their facial expressions are well done and funny, the animation is fluid and looks just natural and cartoonish enough.

If I had to be extra super ultra picky I could spot out two mistakes you made (and I won't be able to spot the exact timing when it occurred because internet is fucked up again).

 

First: when we see the church it looks like the window is already broken, and when Ashley jump through it it's intact, at first.

Second: when Ashley shout "No get away" (and throw wood at Carlos) you can easily hear the video game music at the same time, you used Ashley's voice a lot and it's the only time it's noticeable.

 

As you can see the only way to criticize it is to be really really REALLY picky.

I had a lot of fun watching it and I'll do it again as soon as the internet god hear my pray.

DoubleLeggy's avatar
Yo thanks! I'm glad it looked as such, I did try to make it a scene by scene story so to speak so yee! If you mean the first scene (with lightning) it wasn't meant to look broken, I just had no idea what the Illuminados crest looked like and it's a REALLY shitty drawing of it XD Ended up looking like a hole. I wish I could of got only-voice clips of Ashley, I looked everywhere but could only find versions that had background noise, I didn't like that either D:
dear-sweet-molestia's avatar

YAY !

I managed to watch it again :3

 

An illuminado (so that's how you call them, nice name) is quite easy to depict if you look at it from the outside: it's black.

Those things are only meant to be seen from the inside, and since light go through only one way, they look like dark puzzles form the outside.

 

Wanna know something fun: at the end I cried "LUIS NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!!!"

Couldn't help it.

DoubleLeggy's avatar
Yeah, when I started I didn't have a net connection so no way to get a reference, hell no was I gonna play the game to find out XD But I get what you mean. XD