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*jdyez Feb 18, 2007, 11:05:03 AM
Teaches of Peaches is the album by peaches..Lines about her tits...like "Only double A, thinking Triple X" A whole song called "Fuck the Pain Away". You can see why your poem reminded me of her...
Ruby is less raw, more artful in places, but still comes through with power. Musically she's more interesting--comes out of punk, but this is FUNKY...enjoy.

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"There are two kinds of people in the world. Those who divide people into two kinds of people, and those who don't. Which are you?"

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*Misorishu Oct 15, 2006, 5:52:42 PM
I wish I could write like you. XD

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Because I can.
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Mood: Love ~AJ43837 Oct 15, 2006, 6:42:26 PM
^^; wow! Thanks! I'm a bit surpised and oober-happy at the positive repsonse! :boogie:

Hehe - I was feeling a lil :flirty:..while making dinner....

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"I'm tired of magazines, sayin' flat butts are the thing!"

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My novel - ch 1 [link]

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*Misorishu Oct 15, 2006, 6:51:22 PM
x3 Well, it was really good!

Ah, yeah, I could understand. x33

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Because I can.
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~AJ43837 Oct 15, 2006, 6:54:20 PM
lol :giggle:

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"I'm tired of magazines, sayin' flat butts are the thing!"

My butterfly [link]

My novel - ch 1 [link]

"But why is the r
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*quietboy Oct 16, 2006, 12:29:28 AM
WOW!
If only...wow. Those words were amazing. It like...shines a little light in the fun of marriage and love. almost makes me want to have faith...and not necessarily for the content, but for the thoughtfulness behind it. So loving. Gentle beckoning. Good write love.

If there's any truth to your words, I envy your mate. He has a lovely one himself...

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"Surely if we knew what bitterness fate held in store, we would shrink back in fear and let the cup of life pass us by untasted."

'Kushiel's Dart' by Jacqueline Carey
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*K-especial Oct 16, 2006, 8:54:53 AM
making plans are ya? =P just let me know when to not be there please!

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>K<
"sit yer ass down in th' chair and drink yer %$@&# damn tea!" - Cid
98% of teens have tried or smoked pot before. Put this in your signature if you like bagels.
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Mood: Amazed ~livindeadgrrrl Oct 16, 2006, 11:06:17 AM
Wow!!!! This is definitly something I wouldn't expect from you.

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~Moops~
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~AJ43837 Oct 17, 2006, 10:48:59 AM
lol...oh Moops...I write like this frequently now....gosh, in my novel...the chapters become a bit...steamy sometimes....hehe ;) :strip:

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"I'm tired of magazines, sayin' flat butts are the thing!"

My butterfly [link]

My novel - ch 1 [link]

"But why is the r
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~AJ43837 Oct 17, 2006, 10:50:22 AM
Haha! I promise, you weren't home! ....besides I got NOTHIN'!! that night. damn it....I was just um...in the mood ;)

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"I'm tired of magazines, sayin' flat butts are the thing!"

My butterfly [link]

My novel - ch 1 [link]

"But why is the r
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~AJ43837 Oct 17, 2006, 10:57:52 AM
awww thx dear :blowkiss:

And yes, very much truthful. Comes off as a bit racy in the beginning, but I liked the twist I added to the end - the alarm and the black lace (to question who the other person was) and the twist - that it was all in my imagination, making plans for lata with my man.... ;)

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"I'm tired of magazines, sayin' flat butts are the thing!"

My butterfly [link]

My novel - ch 1 [link]

"But why is the r
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