Glad that worked and Gilda was still rough and Inquisition was adorable.
Anything in specific you liked?
I like her repeated question asked of Grogar's guard, and the repeated oddball titles given to Discord are hilarious. There's more but right now I'm kinda of wiped out from a few days of shoveling snow to really think as much about it as the question deserves.
But I did notice: I WAS mad at Traitor Dash for killing her but I couldn’t see Tratiro Dash as just a monster…
Maybe that ought to be spelled 'Traitor' Dash?
But I did notice: I WAS mad at Traitor Dash for killing her but I couldn’t see Tratiro Dash as just a monster…
Maybe that ought to be spelled 'Traitor' Dash?
I can respect that, though I do hope you'll give me a little more detail later whne you can.
Glad that worked in both cases!
And yeah, thanks, its fixed now.
Re-read this again. I really love little Inquisition's questions to Gilda and the donkey guard. The conversation she had with her mom works pretty good too. Inquisition may be rather a chirpy sort but she's pretty deep.
And there's this particular line:
"Because they weren't a sadistic monster, they didn't takes chicks and turn them into monsters, they didn't steal souls to add to their collection, they didn't obey Clockwork Orange Discord like they were a machine, they didn't kill someone, apologize, kill someone, apologize, over and over and OVER and never once actually CHANGE what they were doing! And because they haven’t been doing it for a thousand years!”
Poor Pinkie and Flutts, almost nopony will remember who they really were once. And who was the one who 'stole souls'? Rarigreed? I forget, does anyone in No-Longer-Dark World know that Princess Libra was once Rarigreed/Lady Desire?
And I really like that title, 'Clockwork Orange Discord'. Dissey would probably enjoy what happens to Alex in that story, though of course he'd rather turn it around and make him back into a sociopath. REAL horrorshow, my droog!
I like the description of how Inquisition drove the poor donkey to distraction in Grogar's dungeon, enabling their mass escape. Good 'inside' perspective there, from the POV of the temporary prisoners.
All in all, it's a great chapter. I hope we get a few more, based on the comments about Aquamarine and some of the other ponies.
And there's this particular line:
"Because they weren't a sadistic monster, they didn't takes chicks and turn them into monsters, they didn't steal souls to add to their collection, they didn't obey Clockwork Orange Discord like they were a machine, they didn't kill someone, apologize, kill someone, apologize, over and over and OVER and never once actually CHANGE what they were doing! And because they haven’t been doing it for a thousand years!”
Poor Pinkie and Flutts, almost nopony will remember who they really were once. And who was the one who 'stole souls'? Rarigreed? I forget, does anyone in No-Longer-Dark World know that Princess Libra was once Rarigreed/Lady Desire?
And I really like that title, 'Clockwork Orange Discord'. Dissey would probably enjoy what happens to Alex in that story, though of course he'd rather turn it around and make him back into a sociopath. REAL horrorshow, my droog!
I like the description of how Inquisition drove the poor donkey to distraction in Grogar's dungeon, enabling their mass escape. Good 'inside' perspective there, from the POV of the temporary prisoners.
All in all, it's a great chapter. I hope we get a few more, based on the comments about Aquamarine and some of the other ponies.
Thanks! I'm glad it worked! Inquisition IS Element of Honesty because she's 'searching for the truth' and constantly trying to dig it up.
And yeah, I think it is sad no one truly remembers them except the remaining Mane Six. And yes, that was Rarigreed. And they do know she was once I THINK.
And thanks! Glad you got the shout out.
Discord: I probably would've said yes to that once, but I'm a changed Draconequus! My main POV Series self on the other claw...
And I'm glad that part worked! It was fun to write!
We might!
Thanks again!