I very much like the light on this one. Not so fan of the orange outlines on the ground shadow, but that's really the only thing I don't like about this work.
Oh, I thought that was a pattern on the pavement. I see it now. Yeah, perhaps different placement/different shade would make it clear that it's the shadow's penumbra.
some kind of blur maybe ?
(sidenote, your avatar cracked me up. i juuust finished reading fullmetal alchemist.)
(sidenote, your avatar cracked me up. i juuust finished reading fullmetal alchemist.)
OMG you're the first to comment on it! 
I have laughed at this thumbnail for an embarrassing amount of time. <3
I have laughed at this thumbnail for an embarrassing amount of time. <3really ? well, you can laugh, it's hilarious.