Comment on The Dungeons and Dragons Geek by Nine-Tailed-Fox
Cool poem but the line "There is no loyal a man than the geek" is really unpleasant to read.
do you mean it is unpleasant because it reads funny, or that it is offensive? if it reads funny, it might be because i needed to use heroic couplets / in iambic pentameter and sound like chaucer's voice.
regardless, i'm glad you like it
regardless, i'm glad you like it
It's broken English and feels somewhat forced. Nothing offensive about it