Oh, man ... if you don't have an account on www.fimfiction.net, have one and post your story there. Seriously, it's short, but it's great. Really great.
I checked and unfortunately Fimfiction doesn't accept the scriptic kind of stories. I woud need to edit the entire story so it would not look as a script. It doesn't mean I won't post it there, but not for now. Still, it is something good to know and I'll probably work on the next ones in a more standard format.