Comment on once stars by Aerode
i really love the way you use such "human" words to describe things that make up everything- and to me seem so much greater. if that makes sense?
"these weary atoms"- where the word "weary" makes me think of someone very tired but it's applied to atoms which makes me think of a small little ball of energy going "i want a freakin' break, mang"
haha.
that was the part that got me loving this piece.
but i love all of it too.
It does make sense. And thank you. 
you so welcome~