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=Elorine:iconElorine: Dec 5, 2006, 11:29:06 PM
Ah well, i figured you wouldn't fall for the spooky bit. ;p

I'm guessing the prank idea sprung up right away cause maybe you'd be one to pull a prank like that... Huh? Hehehe... :D

I was, in truth, going to make it a real skeleton at first, when i started writting it; but as i got towards the end, it already was so long, i decided not to. Then you end up with a whole other story line. I suppose i could have made it a 2 parter...

Thanks. :)

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Mood: Joy *DevinRichard:iconDevinRichard: Nov 27, 2006, 9:27:08 AM
IIIIIIIIIII LIKE IT! YOUR FLOW IS SO COOL!

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=Elorine:iconElorine: Nov 27, 2006, 9:35:57 AM
Thank you :bow: :p

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~spysays:iconspysays: Nov 28, 2006, 11:59:33 AM
I dont' know what's creepyer the thought of that crazy thing grabbing you or the "her" you followed down to that crazy thing??

Scary piece, I like and don't like the light hearted end.. in a way I wanted to be super freaked at the end and in another way I was so damn relieved it wasn't a monster LOL..

Great piece. Nice stroyline..

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=Elorine:iconElorine: Nov 28, 2006, 12:12:23 PM
Hehe, yeah, i entertained the idea of making it scarier, with a real monster, but then it would have had to be much longer and would have needed more description and detail... which would have turned it into a story as opposed to a poem. So i decided to make it a joke from the little boy's sister instead. Maybe someday, i'll turn it into a story and make it real, but i doubt it'll be any time soon... :XD:

Thanks for the comment. :)

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~spysays:iconspysays: Nov 28, 2006, 12:29:26 PM
I dont' know what's creepyer the thought of that crazy thing grabbing you or the "her" you followed down to that crazy thing??

Scary piece, I like and don't like the light hearted end.. in a way I wanted to be super freaked at the end and in another way I was so damn relieved it wasn't a monster LOL..

Great piece. Nice stroyline..

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~spysays:iconspysays: Nov 28, 2006, 1:05:30 PM
LOL fair enough... makes sense.. well one day maybe I'll read that story..=D

Anytime.. !

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=Elorine:iconElorine: Nov 28, 2006, 2:25:33 PM
Maybe you will. :D

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~arc-ician:iconarc-ician: Dec 5, 2006, 10:02:25 PM
OOoooo, spoooooky............

Interesting. Though, I must admit, the idea of a prank was in my mind while I was reading it. So, the ending was sort of expected. It would have been nice to have a skeleton down there, but I see what you were saying (about it needing to be longer if it was a real "living" skeleton).

And how child-like... "I wasn't scared at all..." after she could plainly see he was. Nice touch.

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=Elorine:iconElorine: Dec 5, 2006, 11:29:06 PM
Ah well, i figured you wouldn't fall for the spooky bit. ;p

I'm guessing the prank idea sprung up right away cause maybe you'd be one to pull a prank like that... Huh? Hehehe... :D

I was, in truth, going to make it a real skeleton at first, when i started writting it; but as i got towards the end, it already was so long, i decided not to. Then you end up with a whole other story line. I suppose i could have made it a 2 parter...

Thanks. :)

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Every step, whether long or short, direct or winding, adds to one's journey.

:earth:
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:poke: Visit my gallery :gallery:

My 'store'...
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