TheFantomoftheNight's avatar
That's alright. I can see that you've added additional information to his history and I can say that it does remove the possible confusion to all readers. Donnie's history flows through smoothly and it looks great now. :D

Don't worry about writer's block. You have the ideas, but when it comes to writing them down; they don't necessarily come. I know the feeling. I have it with all three groups I'm in. I have to make Edan's final story for Poke Coast. I have to make an epilogue to Mission One for PMDU with Alan and Fio. I also have to make some story for Illumina City to progress its own story. I have all the ideas in my head, but once I sit down to write; they just vanish. So, in some senses, we're both in the same boat.