Sol-Caninus's avatar
Inks aside (bravo BTW) - you gotta get under the skin and learn what's going on with the bones and muscles, because that's what dictates the changes in shape and, more importantly, it's where the rhythm comes from. 

Major distortion of the ribcage in this position.  It's a solid mass, but you have it facing one way at the top and another way at the bottom. No-no.  Throws off the lines of the musculature which in turn throws off the rhythm.