sevenofeleven's avatar
I could imagine a group like the Deftones, a band that switches from loud to soft doing this as a song.

Maybe even Garbage could do this or Catherine Wheel.

Cool poem.

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Another train goes by, she left me and I want to die.
Back to barely lit days and lonely ways.
She was the light of my life without compare, I will do anything not to go back there!
Pills are too slow and a wussy way to go.
Can't buy a gun, though with one shot I will be done.
No! I want to die while scenery blurs by. 
Could an express train end my pain?
My ticket to ride from this life comes into the station, my heart beats fast in anticipation.
Thump, thump, I prepare to jump.
I am such a coward as another train rolls by again.