Comment on page 1 - Trouble - Suzumega Medabot by AltairSky
is this the true beginning?
yep it starts a bit suddenly because this was supposed to be a short 10 pages story lol... I need to give it a proper start though, and a cover. It will be the my next goal. Don't worry about it, it starts awkward but everything will be explained with time.
is nice, I will get throught it 
how many pages it has already? I like to read a lot at time
how many pages it has already? I like to read a lot at time awesome ^^
it has around 800 pages and the story is finished (last page was published yesterday). Feel free to comment and point out grammar mistakes if you find any ^^
it has around 800 pages and the story is finished (last page was published yesterday). Feel free to comment and point out grammar mistakes if you find any ^^
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhH! so I have interest on it in the perfect moment!!!!
sorry, I can't help with that because I am not english native but I will keep an eye open just in case 
so I have interest on it in the perfect moment!!!!sorry, I can't help with that because I am not english native
but I will keep an eye open just in case Awesome ^_^
I'm sure you'll enjoy the read ^_^
I'm sure you'll enjoy the read ^_^
I am really doing