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Apr 28, 2007, 8:01:41 PM
Apr 28, 2007, 8:01:41 PM
I really enjoy this, as I enjoy most of your drawings. I will, however, try to give you some constructive criticism:
I think the texture on the tentacles looks a bit like it doesn't belong there. If you had placed a different part of the texture over each of the tentacles separately, rather than superimposed one large texture over all of them at once, it probably would have looked better. And if you increased the contrast of the background (or made it look more 'illustrative' some other way) I think it would stylistically match the creature better.
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I think the texture on the tentacles looks a bit like it doesn't belong there. If you had placed a different part of the texture over each of the tentacles separately, rather than superimposed one large texture over all of them at once, it probably would have looked better. And if you increased the contrast of the background (or made it look more 'illustrative' some other way) I think it would stylistically match the creature better.
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I think the texture on the tentacles looks a bit like it doesn't belong there. If you had placed a different part of the texture over each of the tentacles separately, rather than superimposed one large texture over all of them at once, it probably would have looked better. And if you increased the contrast of the background (or made it look more 'illustrative' some other way) I think it would stylistically match the creature better.
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*StillWater-- dice:
"Realmente me gusta esto, tal como me gustan la mayoría de tus dibujos. Intentaré, sin embargo, entregarte una crítica constructiva:
Creo que la textura de los tentáculos luce un poco como si no perteneciera ahí. Si hubieras puesto una parte diferente de la textura sobre cada uno de los tentaculos por separado, en vez de sobreponer una gran textura sobre todos a la vez, probablemente se vería mejor. Y si aumentaras el contraste del fondo (o lo hicieras mas "ilustrativo" de alguna otra manera) creo que combinaría mejor estilísticamente con la criatura."
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