it almost looks like two whole different pictures, in a way, because of the dark contrast between the building (the one to the right, where the mann falls down) and the background. and that is, to me at least, good, because it makes it different and it's unique. I dig.
A few critiques, since you're asking; first off, the colour of the dude. i don't know if it was supposed to be blood or not, but i guess so, and even if it's not, most people will think so, and in either case, the red should be darker. not much, but a bit, becasue it looks a bit too pink.
then there is the window from where he drops, and the other ones on the same building; i think you should darken the edges and create a smoother shift between the windows and the building. right now you can see that it's just a window cut out and placed onto the building (the window as in the window and some of the wall behind it).
maybe it was intentional, but still, it would look better if it didn't look like you pasted a picture onto the wall.
last little thing; in the upper left corner, it sorta looks like there's two frames. maybe fix that?
advanced critique, go! but really, i already dig this, it can only get better!
-- Spansk Svada, gutter. det ser ut som om dere spiller i band!
it almost looks like two whole different pictures, in a way, because of the dark contrast between the building (the one to the right, where the mann falls down) and the background. and that is, to me at least, good, because it makes it different and it's unique. I dig.
A few critiques, since you're asking; first off, the colour of the dude. i don't know if it was supposed to be blood or not, but i guess so, and even if it's not, most people will think so, and in either case, the red should be darker. not much, but a bit, becasue it looks a bit too pink.
then there is the window from where he drops, and the other ones on the same building; i think you should darken the edges and create a smoother shift between the windows and the building. right now you can see that it's just a window cut out and placed onto the building (the window as in the window and some of the wall behind it).
maybe it was intentional, but still, it would look better if it didn't look like you pasted a picture onto the wall.
last little thing; in the upper left corner, it sorta looks like there's two frames. maybe fix that?
advanced critique, go! but really, i already dig this, it can only get better!
-- Spansk Svada, gutter. det ser ut som om dere spiller i band!
god, cloak of love is the best. this is fantastic, i love all the controlled messiness in your work. this is so genghis tron, too. all the close buildings and the bloody dude and the birds and i dunno, everything.
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A few critiques, since you're asking; first off, the colour of the dude. i don't know if it was supposed to be blood or not, but i guess so, and even if it's not, most people will think so, and in either case, the red should be darker. not much, but a bit, becasue it looks a bit too pink.
then there is the window from where he drops, and the other ones on the same building; i think you should darken the edges and create a smoother shift between the windows and the building. right now you can see that it's just a window cut out and placed onto the building (the window as in the window and some of the wall behind it).
maybe it was intentional, but still, it would look better if it didn't look like you pasted a picture onto the wall.
last little thing; in the upper left corner, it sorta looks like there's two frames. maybe fix that?
advanced critique, go! but really, i already dig this, it can only get better!
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