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Comment on Integrity by ~sticktoontoyou

I have to be honest man, and I don't mean this to be blunt, but this isn't that good. as far as the placement and the composition, it's really static and random. I like the texture and the sketchy style with the illustrations around the soldeirs, but they don't seem to really go along with the point of this piece, and are kind of random. I see an R in there, idk what that means. Some parts of this are wicked cool like the pattern overlay barely moved from the left soldier, but the piece as a whole is lacking.

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Maybe one of your best pieces in a while, but I still have issues (personal) with the way you've created that "balloon" that is showing the thoughts of the girl.

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And not only is it one of my best pieces I've submitted in a while, it's the first piece I've submitted in a while lol.

Well, my first serious piece anyway.
I think that grainy pattern alongside the figures should be a solid color, it seems a bit weird the multicolor it is.

Very nice work regardless :D

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Nice Lp.
Good Job.

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I have to be honest man, and I don't mean this to be blunt, but this isn't that good. as far as the placement and the composition, it's really static and random. I like the texture and the sketchy style with the illustrations around the soldeirs, but they don't seem to really go along with the point of this piece, and are kind of random. I see an R in there, idk what that means. Some parts of this are wicked cool like the pattern overlay barely moved from the left soldier, but the piece as a whole is lacking.
hmmm... Well everyone seems to like it, so Im not just gonna scrap it...
i really like it, good composition, whats the concept behind it :#1:? :+fav:

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