Ah myspace... Paul and I will perpetually be out of the loop.
You might want to hyphenate Descart-ian, or make it Descartes-like. In order not to appear stupid I asked everyone in the office if they knew what the word meant (after checking numerous on-line dictionaries), and we all came up blank. No one thought to link it to Descartes. The explanation was quite a relief this morning.
On the whole, I think the piece should have a smoother flow in reference to the subject matter portrayed. It's difficult to follow, and thus seems contradictory. Again, this is just me, I tend to look farther into things than intended.
As far as the wu/hope ordeal: I can totally see that. I can somewhat see the ties between wu and "giving it up to God" as well, but I would add some distinguishing separators between the two. Christianity embraces hope. It's one of the fundamentals of the belief, hope that God will work with life to make everything work out. But then I guess it depends who you ask, some believe in 100% predestination, some less so.
As Christians say, it's all part of God's plan, but that's really not the same as being a leaf in a flowing river. Christians give their concerns to God, but still feel that decisions and actions have an important bearing on the future (lots of sweeping generalizations here). A loss of conscious control of life as complete as wu would render many sacred principles of Christianity obsolete, such as marriage and repenting sins. What is the point of bonding eternally if all that exists is the moment? Same is repenting sins of the past to cleanse the future.
The Christian version of predestination to me seems to be more positive... hopeful, fortunate. I'm not an expert, but to me the Eastern views seem more so if not at times completely neutral. Rather than "Everything will work out," it's "What will be will be." There is no hope in that. Granted the former is bullshit, but a great many people truly mean that when they say it. Especially Christians. "Jesus loves you and will watch over you." That's hope.
I envy that.
To be so sure of something. To be so positive that something is forever. My belief is that only two things are forever: God and true love. Since neither exist, there is no forever.