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Comment on Kisses by ~unorthodoxfaith

AWWW I like it...especially the connection of the 2 kinds of kisses and how used either way the poem works

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What would I pay

To stay here beside you?

What would I do to see you

Smiling at me?

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Ugh, DA was being stupid and decided to NOT let me submitt the picture I was going to put on top of it- despite the fact that it WAS in .Jpg format.

Anyway...Oh yeah just to let you know, this poem is meant to be a little cutesy before you go all Psyco on my ass

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AWWW I like it...especially the connection of the 2 kinds of kisses and how used either way the poem works

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What would I pay

To stay here beside you?

What would I do to see you

Smiling at me?
Aw thanks ^__^ I dunno....Just felt like chocolate hehehe

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^^ Thanks :D

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Aww, I like that, it sounds like something someone would attach to a hershey kiss! Hmm...chocolate *drool*

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Love heals when you feel so small
Like a grain of sand
Like nothing at all
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I love ye ~johnnydepp


~FireMage :jester:
the melting in the mouth part is kinda kinky..=X jkjk nice way to convey candy..=D =P ;)

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It could just be a mood I'm in, but my imagination is running away with that last line. So many possibilities....

*slaps self, pulls mind from gutter*

I mean, great poem! I love your, uh, technique. And stuff.

*mind wanders*

Oh forget it. It's a good poem, nice and simple and sweet in more ways than one, and I really enjoyed reading it. So I'll leave it at that. :D
...Er.. *reads over last line*

O.O

That wasn't supposed to be suggestive in ANYWAY...but I guess since you pointed it out...

lol :dies: oh man that is pretty funny!!

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Woo hoo I'm kinky!! :dance:

I rock my own sox, lol

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