Comment on Donna's New Look, Part 3: Reversals of Fortune by LutherVKane
I haven't read a word of this story yet. Just posting to say that I'm looking forward to this.
Ok, I'm back. Not what I expected, but I appreciate how it went.
I've actually been sitting on a decent April Fool's idea for a while, just been too lazy to write it.
I've actually been sitting on a decent April Fool's idea for a while, just been too lazy to write it.
Yeah, there's a lot of weird stuff going on in this one.
This almost didn't happen because I couldn't figure out how to end it. I went through a number of ideas but hey all sucked. The ending had to be entertaining while clearly communicating "No, Donna's not actually dead, this is an April Fool's joke."
I eventually settled on show rather than tell, and I think it works.
This almost didn't happen because I couldn't figure out how to end it. I went through a number of ideas but hey all sucked. The ending had to be entertaining while clearly communicating "No, Donna's not actually dead, this is an April Fool's joke."
I eventually settled on show rather than tell, and I think it works.