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Comment on Hinata, Sakura, and ino maids by ~magicalgirlj

~Tristan-the-Dreamer:iconTristan-the-Dreamer: Mar 11, 2008, 1:02:32 PM
Hinata's eyes are spot-on, Sakura's hair is lovely floppy and silky, and Ino has an Ino-esque coy pose. It struck me the way you drew Hinata so much smaller; you're using perspective, right? She's farther away. I think you could put in a little background to hammer this point home--maybe make slanting floorboards to show the aproaching vanishing line, or even have Hinata nervously standing behind a chair that is also smaller than furniture closer to the viewer.

I would really encourage you to try different poses. It's very hard, I know, but if you did like Ino with a hand on her hip, fingers hugging her side cockily, or maybe Sakura twisting so she's only partly facing the front...just experient, dream it, do it.

~Tris

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*Kagekitsue:iconKagekitsue: Nov 17, 2007, 5:57:26 PM
so awesome! what should the hotel be called? you should make a comic about that. just suggesting... okay...

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~Tristan-the-Dreamer:iconTristan-the-Dreamer: Mar 11, 2008, 1:02:32 PM
Hinata's eyes are spot-on, Sakura's hair is lovely floppy and silky, and Ino has an Ino-esque coy pose. It struck me the way you drew Hinata so much smaller; you're using perspective, right? She's farther away. I think you could put in a little background to hammer this point home--maybe make slanting floorboards to show the aproaching vanishing line, or even have Hinata nervously standing behind a chair that is also smaller than furniture closer to the viewer.

I would really encourage you to try different poses. It's very hard, I know, but if you did like Ino with a hand on her hip, fingers hugging her side cockily, or maybe Sakura twisting so she's only partly facing the front...just experient, dream it, do it.

~Tris
~yuri-akatsuki-whore:iconyuri-akatsuki-whore: May 4, 2008, 2:43:10 PM
teh akatsuki whore needs some maids i'll hire all six.
~magicalgirlj:iconmagicalgirlj: May 5, 2008, 9:26:08 AM
oh yea they need a harem in their reverse harem ^_^

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