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:D I used to write loads of darker stuff....but then I stopped...and when I wrote this I was in such a bad mood, it was untrue. Anyway, thanks for reading and for the comment too :hug:

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Lovely opening - the maggot metaphor is wonderful. I think the way you isolate the word 'gone' is really effective. You misspelt 'peculiar' - if you fix that, it will be a consistently good piece.
maggots don't mate .....they're the larvae of flies which do mate

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I like it, I think this is the first dark poem of yours I've seen
How gruesome! :D keep on writting. By the way I'm curious, what usually inspires you to write?

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:lol: I can't spell....but thank you for the spelling, and the comment :hug:

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...bothered?

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:D I used to write loads of darker stuff....but then I stopped...and when I wrote this I was in such a bad mood, it was untrue. Anyway, thanks for reading and for the comment too :hug:

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be yourself
everyone else is already taken.
Hehehe, yup...well, Im not gonna stop

Inspiration usually comes from 2 sources: things that have happened to me, usually emotions, or places Ive been. The other one is a whole 'what if' scenario, which links in to number one source...emotions for example. 'What if they were related?'

But mainly, its my deranged mind...just spews rendom stuff at me....

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obviously not :rofl:

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