Comment on Alana Version 1.2 by ~TheMikko[top] [parent]

nice muscle detail on the anatomy

She looks good! I'll have another go, but will have to wait a while when I have winter break.

'WINTER break'? (O_o) Man, that'll be SOME wait... Well, not like I'm going anywhere and I know I'll get a big kick out of seeing it once it's done, so thank you. (^_^)

If it helps some, my winter, not yours. So around July
It's getting too near exams time for me

AH. Well that sounds a LOT better. Good luck with the exams. Hope you ace them and start your vacation with a happy mood. (^_^)

Thank you thank you

I think I liked the long haired better, but otherwise its better like this nice job ^^

Nice lines on this one. I also like her big legs, and the roundness you have depicted in her arm and chest muscles.
There are a few flaws that bug me- her arms look short, and the muscles on her forearms are a bit odd- those big bulges on the outside of her forearms are a nonexistent muscle I think- or else they are misplaced. Also, her chin is a bit strong/large for a gal.
Finally, on drawing toes- the ones you've done aren't bad, but could be better- generally, the toe grows out from the foot, then comes to a knuckle. From this knuckle, the toe descends a bit, like a tiny little stairstep, and proceeds to the toenail and end of the toe. This is the way the big toe and the middle 3 toes are. The little toe is more like the toes you have drawn here, but it can vary widely from person to person.
Anyway, nice work, and hope to see more from you in the future!

--
Jebriodo

Thank you for the GREAT feedback. I'll try and take it to heart. I'm still VERY much in the phase of developing my style, so it's great to get tips like this. Looking at it now, I agree with each one. Hopefully you'll like the next one of this genre even more. (^-^)