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"God is in His Heaven- All's right with the World."
The narrator is mostly fictional--as a child, I did hide behind the holly bush in my backyard a lot and watch the day's happenings, but the rest is fictional.
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"God is in His Heaven- All's right with the World."
Anyhow, I love what you have done here, I think that the setting of the narrator behind a holly bush witnessing her surroundings is great. I also love how the sound of the parents arguing was kind of equated to and also drowned out by the sounds of buzzing bees or cicadas.
Love the subtlety of the bruised lip and the parents arguing. keep up the good work!
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Strong poem here--it starts out with a more typical child's escape, but then we learn it's a bit darker than that. I like the couplet structure, although in the first couplet, the line break felt a bit awkward to me. However, I understand your desire to emphasis the word "holly." Good nature images, too.
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Critiquing someone's prose or poetry is an awesome thing to do.
Yeah, the "holly / bush" line break isn't as good/strong as it could be. I just can't find a way around it. :/ Thanks for your time.
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