Cemf's avatar
A bit polluted for collage style,and it missed quality.But it's also good!
tzum's avatar
I appreciate critique so I will try and understand yours. Polluted by what? What is "collage style"? and what quality did it miss?
Cemf's avatar
Polluted by many shapes,they made the canvas full =X You should dim the edges to give more focus,this work is missing postwork.Collage style?You put your work in the section "collage" and don't know what is it?Strange.And yeah,you missed much quality,unfortunately,dA drastically strip the job's quality.