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Comment on R45 by ~Tmunky

Honestly, I prefer the original...except I like the part about the hats:) I love the concept...
Question: How do you post literature? I tried, but I'm doing something wrong...

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nicely done, I like the structure

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And So I asked, Is this who you are or who you are supposed to be?
Thank you. It took quite a while to get it like this.

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Amelia puts out.
<3
Honestly, I prefer the original...except I like the part about the hats:) I love the concept...
Question: How do you post literature? I tried, but I'm doing something wrong...
This is a joke, right? Please god, tell me this is a joke.
No, this is a joke:

Q: How many xdarknessdescendingxings does it take to change a lightbulb?

A: They put holes in your nose and eat your fingers.

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<salshep> <ordie>I should wite something awsome
<salshep> It's true
<ordie> You're write. That's my one-size-fits-all reort.

#Cabal. Because someone needs to be.
I read this
and it was good.

mmm.

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~eldestmuse, formerly ~ladyofx
Contrary to popular opinion, the plural of 'anecdote' is not 'fact.'
Learn more about me at the hearth
That's fascinating, how you used the spacing to make a visual poem. It really makes the poem dynamic, and gives use a keyhole view into the memory you shared. :)

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People living deeply have no fear of death.- Anais Nin
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We need to be the change we wish to see in the world.- Mohandas K. Gandhi
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When Life does not find a singer to sing her heart she produces a philosopher to speak her mind.- Kahlil Gibran
A sound piece of visual poetry. :)
Terrific job, I loved it.

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Whenever ideas fail, men invent words. ~Martin H. Fischer
i like the final, but i actually liked the original better. :shrug: just a personal preference i suppose.

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